Description: This term we chose a goal to focus on in Writing. I chose Sentences, because my writing doesn't have a mix of long and short sentences.
Big Idea: A complex sentence is a sentence with an independent and a dependent clause. This is an example: Tane is a boy, with brown eyes. To make sure it is a complex sentence, you need to add a comma in the correct place.
Feedback:I liked how you added heaps of complex sentences.
Feedforward: I can't find any feedforward. #Finis
Evaluation: I like that I added quite a few complex sentences. Next time I could add 1 or 2 per paragraph/