tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1297913558178225305.post991084024845685947..comments2016-09-16T03:27:43.825-07:00Comments on Tane's Blog 2015: Writing SampleStags FC Newshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01651043505868598996noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1297913558178225305.post-30601290514415953162014-06-25T02:37:03.298-07:002014-06-25T02:37:03.298-07:00I like how you have used a bit of humour at the en...I like how you have used a bit of humour at the end there Tane! Great job! You have explained your ideas very well. Next time, you need to add some more detail around the vocabulary you are using - don't assume that your reader will know what kinetic energy is. Make sure you spend a couple of sentences explaining what the different parts are.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com